TrinStar Page 1 a great start
I like the introduction so far. I like how you already give information about the character, instead of the character having to monologue to the reader. It gives it more of a realistic feeling, than having the character narrate the story and seem like they know that there are people 'watching them'. Also it's great how your did the zoom in on the last panels and added the lines in the background, gives the story more suspense and makes me want to find out what happens next. One suggestion is to play around with the panels a bit, make them different shape or have the characters pop out of the panel border to make certain important parts stand out the most. Hope that helps C:
