Cheang's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Reaper]

wow

for a 2 hour speed paint, this is really good. Some thing like this would of taken me more than 2 hours and the fact that you didn't use reference is amazing as well. what I love most is how you use your dark and gray tones. It's not so much or intense to the point where you can make out what the scenery is, everything is clear and balanced. Great job!^^

[The Smex]

very nice.

your anatomy is not bad at all. this is really good, you did well with the cg coloring and his expression. The only thing that bothers me a bit is his hips. It should be facing the same direction as his upper body way, or maybe it's the pants' position. But either way, overall, I like it. Great job^^

[ER Donation Reward - Bromie]

wow!

you did really great on the coloring, especially on the armor. I could tell by the design that this is warcraft related, bravos on everything^^

[TrinStar Page 1]

a great start

I like the introduction so far. I like how you already give information about the character, instead of the character having to monologue to the reader. It gives it more of a realistic feeling, than having the character narrate the story and seem like they know that there are people 'watching them'. Also it's great how your did the zoom in on the last panels and added the lines in the background, gives the story more suspense and makes me want to find out what happens next. One suggestion is to play around with the panels a bit, make them different shape or have the characters pop out of the panel border to make certain important parts stand out the most. Hope that helps C:

OnionsXD responds:

Daaang...thanks for this awesome review!! I'll tell you when I upload the next page! and about the comic panels I know what you mean...when I was doing the thumbnails...I didn't realize I was being kinda plain with that up until about page 7....but after that I was taking more time to be creative about the layout. :)

[The Siren]

Great job! <3

this is a very nice piece of work you got here. I love how you added the ground surface of the ocean and the top water surface itself, it really shows more beauty to the girl too.^^

DragonPunch responds:

Thank you very much! I like your witch picture a lot! She's just so adorable!